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The pitch and your idea were both good, in order to improve you could find a way to get the genre of the film across because this was not very clear.
ReplyDeleteLouise Cleaver (Media Dons)
i think the narrative of you film is quite intresting, with the snitches get stitches but you need to make it more clearer. i think it will be good opening, you just need put more thought on how your going to represent your genre and you can end it with that one person 'snitching' on them, going with the title.
ReplyDeleteFarjana R
The genre is clearly established as crime thriller. The pitch was kind of hard to understand and needs a bit of work as the audience may find it hard to understand.
ReplyDeleteAzmain
The pitch was very hard for me to understand and it would be hard for other audiences to understand, I could tell that it is crime/thriller. the story seems very long and complicating.
ReplyDelete/ Jayeb
what is your established genre? is it crime, thriller or drama? this pitch to me looks like it is a crime drama as the title of the opening "snitches get stiches" would suggest. I think you need to think about more on how to portray your type of genre as it can get very confusing to what your trying to show.
ReplyDeleteIshmail
The pitch was good but to make it better you may have to present the genre a bit clearer. It was a bit hard 4 me to understand and i think the audience will also find it hard to understand. Make the changes and make the pitch more clear to understand.
ReplyDeleteAkram
The genre of this pitch is clearly represtented that its crime thriller.I totally think that the auidence will understand the genre and liek the pitch you have presented.
ReplyDeleteErdinc