Monday 9 January 2012

Pitch 1

There Is Two Guys Who Will Do A Robbery At A Bank. At The Beginning of The Film We See A Two Shot Of The Two Guys In Balaclaves With Weapons In Their Hand. Credits, Sound Hear a Gun Reloads. Next Shot Is The Other Guy Smashing the door in and saying everyoneee get down on the floor !!! Then Credits Come Saying Wavey Productions Present Snitches Get Stitches ! Music - Tension Building sound. etc
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  1. bazinga1111 January 2012 at 13:15

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  2. bazinga1111 January 2012 at 13:34

    Aslams pitch is clear and understandable, i can tell that it going to be a film on action. I think his opening is great because it starts off with something big happening straight away and will make the audiece want to continue watching it, but he needs to explain what type of camera shots he will use to show this and also this opening may be too short.

    Yasmin xx

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    1. bazinga1112 January 2012 at 09:30

      Aslams pitch is good but he could have used a different storyline as almost all the work in his group is based on similar genres. The pitch would come across better if he explained how he would film it e.g. different types of shots. Also the filming may be tricky because of the use of balaclaves incase the public think there is something really going on.

      Nikhat

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